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JEAN!” she screamed. No answer.

“JEAN!” she tried again, her voice cracking. A low whimper came from her as her eyes glanced over to the intruder. Her heart stopped momentarily when they began to draw closer to her cowering form. Instinctively she drew back until her back hit the wall. The feeling of helplessness was overwhelming and, for an instant, she thought it was all over.

Good-bye cruel world…

[Name]?”

Her savior, hopefully, she thought as she turned to him with puffy, red eyes. She could see the alarm in his honey-golden eyes and wondered if he was too terrified himself to do anything. But the brunet, it appeared, seemed to completely bypass the danger and began to take a step forward.

“JEAN, NO.”

Her plea made him freeze in his tracks. With a disgruntled look, he sighed, “What the hell is going on?” But instead of an answer, she pointed toward the counter. His eyes followed immediately until they landed on a small figure moving across the marbled surface. The figure turned out to be that of a spider--a cute, brown, fuzzy spider that may have been about an inch long. Upon seeing the thing crawl around for a second or so, he chuckled, realizing that his girlfriend was freaking out over a stupid bug.

“Really? You’re crying because of that?” He looked over with that coy smile of his and watched as she nodded, her eyes nevering leaving the bug.

[Name], I don’t have time--”

“Kill it. Just...get it out of here!” she begged. Although it was cute to see her fret, the desperation in her voice was enough to make him grab a small, plastic cup on the table and inch toward the bug. Without a word, he slammed it down, turning back to her with a triumphant smirk.

“Done.” But the look on her face wasn’t that of relief.

“I said kill it.”

“Why?”

“So it doesn’t come back here in the middle of the night and infect me!”

He gave her a disgusted look as if he were saying ‘you’re kidding.’ But she wasn’t. The fear was very much real.

“Jean!” she sounded tired and he sighed in defeat.

“Fine, fine… whatever.” His golden optics searched for something to kill it with but, ever-so helpful, his girlfriend handed him a rolled up newspaper. With a grunt, he took it, turned around, aware of her presence behind him, and began to lift the plastic lid up. The grip she had on the back of his shirt tightened when the lid fully exposed…

Nothing.

There was nothing on the counter, nothing in the cup.

“...”

“...”

“I’m sleeping over Sasha’s. Bye.”

“Wait, [Name]!” He called after her. Seeing that she wouldn’t answer, he threw the items onto the counter and ran after her, that sudden fear overcoming him as well.

“Take me with you!”
based off an experience I had with the little buggers. 

i hate spiders so much omg ;;;;;

this is also my first piece of art on this account, woo!! I just feel as if I missed it entirely. Whatever. Hope you enjoy!

also my title sucks ugh

Jean Kirschtein  Hajime Isayama
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dammiteren Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
Protective Jean Jean Kirschstein (Blush) [V2] 
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:iconthe-water-maidenmoon:
AHHh that's soooo meeeee!!!!!!!
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DarkStripesminion Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
So short...So sad...So not loving...TAKE ME WITH YOU!

You look at him. "Sasha doesn't like you does she?"Jean scratched his head. "She wouldn't mind if you brang me with."You knew what he wanted. "Ok fine,come on."You said jogging out of the door to your car. "That spider won't come back would it?"Jean shook his head.

Ah my pathetic life to add on....Spider Araignee Britney Spears - Perfect Jean ...Very Pathetic...
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Mirajosefin Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really liked this!!
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Fabuloushanji Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
My little jean💖
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lillydiezi Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I've been afraid of spiders since I had a nightmare where a guy came with spiders to class and let them free and they became mutants and it terrified me. Everytime I see a tiny black spider I freeze. I make my family members kill it.
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CadetSkylarLloyd101 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016
I one time tried to kill a spider with a glass cup, big mistake, i missed and instead hit the spiders abdomen and popped the egg sac, and tiny spiders went everywhere, just like in the video with the broom and stuff.
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blue--ribbons Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016
this is simultaneously the best and worst comment i recieved to date
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CadetSkylarLloyd101 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016
Lol, sorry and your welcome?
anyways your an awesome writer 🍞👏❤️
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CypressBlueSky Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2016
Lol that's me if there is a spider someone other than me better kill it and if it disappears then I'm going to run to the other side of the world pikachu icon 
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tavros12 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist
I'm ok with spiders 
what I hate is roaches or the big water bugs that look like them!
dear lord I hate those so much but I keep finding them EVERYWHERE!!!! 
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Carlyisntahuman Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015
Llama Emoji-65 (Blood Tears...) [V3]  TAKE ME WITH YOU!
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ShakiraIcySilverWolf Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I HATE YOU, DEMON SPAWN FROM HELL!
...jean kill it.
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LunaGamerImInPortal Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Student General Artist
FUCK SAHA'S PLACE, IM GONNA GO TO DISNEYLAND, BYE BISHES *flies away in a magical rainbow*
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Aemham Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015
Jean & Reader-Chan: SASHA. THERE WAS A SPIDER
Sasha: OH GOD NO (Ratchet chat icon) roar scream Supernatural OMG Come in my children.

Jean: *Tries to enter*

Sasha: *Stands in front of Jean* DID I SAY HORSES?
Jean:RAGE 
Reader-Chan: *Walks in with swag*Joon: Bitch Please Im Fabulous XD 
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sorrynotsorrycupcake Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015
Haaaa..

fucking spiders.
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
kILL IT WITH FIRE
FŪÇKÏŃG
SPIDERS ARE SATANS FURRY ASSHOLE SHITS
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Jessleia Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Student Artist
Brush i feel your pain I HATE BUGS BUT I HATE SPIDERS THE MOST
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susubeansu Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This feels so terribly relatable I think I could cry.
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
OMG JEAN XD ROFL "Take me with you!"
ROOFFLL and you do realize Sasha's place it probaly 100% worse espically if she has A LOT of food right O__o bugs looove food....
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blue--ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
/honestly doesn't know why people still even like this but appreciates each and every comment anyway

LOL

probably :'D 
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
People like it cause of one main thing: Humor....... HHUUMMOR I TELL YOU!!!
and your profile pic.... I cant stop myself from saying "derp" each time your totodile opens its mouth... X_X MUST STAHP LOOKING!!! @_@
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blue--ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
lmao Totodile <3
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Cuddly-DorkPie Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
bwhahaha this is really funny! you did a good job! :DHeart 

I'm honestly not fussed by spiders, i get them around the house all the time (thats probably because i live in Australia and they're everywhere >.< ) I remember when there was a spider on my school bag and i picked it up and no joke this spider was as big as my hand haha i called it Harry :D 
anywaaay i threw it outside while everyone in the house freaked out XD 
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blue--ribbons Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
you brave soul omg

but thank you!! <3
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Cuddly-DorkPie Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
haha X3 
you're very welcome! keep up the good work ~ <3 
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Natural-Causes3141 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
My boyfriend is just like this x) he once refused to go down a small flight of steps because there was a spider on the railing and went around instead. Bees though, now those I have a problem with.
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AmberVantas69 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The last sentences had me dying omg
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Silenathallimar1 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"I'm sleeping over Sasha's. Bye" omg I'm laughing so hard :D
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TorturedThief Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
heheheh, that reminds me of my math class. There was a spider that was about 2.5 inches leg to leg in width,it reminded me of a large banana spider. Our teacher is from Jamaica, so when one of the girls saw it she screamed , "OH MY GOD YOU BROUGHT IT WITH YOU FROM JAMAICA!" and everyone laughed.
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AnimeGamer1223 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Artist
That's me!

At least they didn't use the last resort. . .
Meaning burning the entire house down. 
:kiwf: Spider Araignee Firelite-photo 
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spadegrrl Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
:iconscaredplz: ugh spiders..
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stevie-writes Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So much love for this, it's perfect. 
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